Sunday, January 17, 2010

my snow haiku

snow brings white safety
as she reclaims humans concrete world
but hubris soon shows
Posted by Glen at 8:46 pm

1 comment:

Robyn and Mark said...

Love it!
Only thing is, 2nd line needs an apostrophe and 2 fewer syllables.
Gotta love having an English teacher for a sister.

Kisses
R

1/19/2010 1:15 pm

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