Sunday, January 17, 2010

my snow haiku

snow brings white safety
as she reclaims humans concrete world
but hubris soon shows
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1 comment:

  1. Robyn and Mark1/19/2010 1:15 pm

    Love it!
    Only thing is, 2nd line needs an apostrophe and 2 fewer syllables.
    Gotta love having an English teacher for a sister.

    Kisses
    R

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